1pg SHORT SCREENPLAY – LATE NIGHT, by Deepa Dharmaraj

Winning Screenplay – LATE NIGHT
Written by Deepa Dharmaraj
CAST LIST:

JESSY – Andrea Meister
NARRATOR – Cynthia Crofoot

SYNOPSIS:

Genre: Thriller

In a late night, a lady walks alone in lonely street. She turns and sees as she feels someone is following her. At that time, suddenly a guy comes and stands in front of her. The guy is affected by autism .His hands are flapping, head is rolling. As soon as she sees the guy, she screams and runs from that place. She sees a taxi and she goes in that taxi. At last she realizes the taxi driver is psycho killer.


Get to know the winning writer:

What is your screenplay about?

In a late night, a lady walks alone in lonely street and when she sees autism affected guy, she screams and runs from that place and gets caught to a psycho killer.

What genres does your screenplay under?

Thriller

How would you describe this script in two words?

Thriller twist

Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?

It is related to women safety.

What movie have you seen the most times in your life?

X-MEN

How long have you been working on this screenplay?

One day.

How many stories have you written?

20 stories, three long screenplays

What motivated you to write this screenplay?

Being a woman, I want to make a screenplay related to women safety and being a doctor, I included an autism affected character.

What obstacles did you face to finish this screenplay?

None.

Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?

film direction, dance

What influenced you to enter the festival? What were your feelings on the initial feedback you received?

I could see many writers are getting chance to prove their talents through LA Feedback film festival! This influenced me to enter this festival! I felt really very happy when I received good feedback!

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Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne
Editor: John Johnson

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Winning Short Screenplay – Love Hurts by Michael Gavino

Best Scene from the screenplay LOVE HURTS Screenplay
Written by Michael Gavino

CAST LIST:

NARRATOR – Gabriel Darku

SYNOPSIS:

Genre: Comedy

Love Hurts is a comedy about love at first sight can often be painful.

Get to know the writer:

What is your screenplay about?

Love Hurts is a comedy about love at first sight can often be painful

What genres does your screenplay fall under?

Comedy

Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?

It is relatable to all. All of us know that love at first sight is a fairy tale that overlooks lots of complications

How would you describe this script in two words?

Love hurts

What movie have you seen the most times in your life?

Citizen Kane

How long have you been working on this screenplay?

20 years

How many stories have you written?

Over 50

What motivated you to write this screenplay?

I wanted to write a humorous take on the classic Hollywood trope of love at first sight.

What obstacles did you face to finish this screenplay?

Time constraints

Any advice or tips you’d like to pass on to other writers?

I would recommend loving what you do and loving your story. Thus, your story should align with your passion. You will be spending a lot of time writing and rewriting your story. If you do not love your story, it will be tough to complete and tough to spend the necessary time to make it great.

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Director/Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com

Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne

Editor: John Johnson

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Winning Short Screenplay – I Can Catch A Bullet by Reynaldo A Garza

Best Scene from the screenplay I CAN CATCH A BULLET Screenplay
Written by Reynaldo A Garza

CAST LIST:

HOMLESS MAN – Peter Nelson
NARRATOR – Laura Kyswaty
PASSENGER – Gabriel Darku

SYNOPSIS:

Genre: Comedy

Two brothers on a road trip.


Get to know the writer:

What is your screenplay about?

Two brothers in a roadtrip.

What genres does your screenplay fall under?

Comedy (dark)

Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?

Its funny and new.

How would you describe this script in two words?

Bullet catch

What movie have you seen the most times in your life?

Mad max

How long have you been working on this screenplay?

About 17 minutes.

How many stories have you written?

Over 200

What motivated you to write this screenplay?

Finding the free time

What obstacles did you face to finish this screenplay?

The idea was there

Any advice or tips you’d like to pass on to other writers?

Dont stop writing

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Director/Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com

Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne

Editor: John Johnson

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Winning Short Screenplay – Diaspora by David Brin

Best Scene from the screenplay DIASPORA Screenplay
Written by David Brin

CAST LIST:

NARRATOR – Dan Cristofori
WOMAN SCIENTIST – Laura Kyswaty
DRIVE – Gabriel Darku

SYNOPSIS:

Genre: Sci-Fi

If we ever detect a signal from beyond, scientists think they will be in charge of first contact. But maybe not!


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Director/Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com

Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne

Editor: John Johnson

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Winning Short Screenplay – Sunday Drive by Paige Brien

SUNDAY DRIVE
Written by Paige Brien

CAST LIST:

PAM – Laura Kyswaty
JOHN – Dan Cristofori
VERN – Peter Nelson
NARRATOR – Kelly Daly

SYNOPSIS:

Drama

1pg. screenplay about: How rude we are on the road to strangers. How when you let the little things get to you, there is an underlying reason. And finally, how fast we are moving in today’s society – road rage, texting, instant gratifications, etc.

Get to know the winning writer:

What is your screenplay about?

It is about so much! About how old traditions have fallen away. How rude we are on the road to strangers. How when you let the little things get to you, there is an underlying reason. And finally, how fast we are moving in today’s society – road rage, texting, instant gratifications, etc.

What genres does your screenplay under?

Drama

Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?

It is truly relevant for today.

How would you describe this script in two words?

Real. Life.

What movie have you seen the most times in your life?

Stepbrothers! Ha.

How long have you been working on this screenplay?

I had the idea for awhile. Life moves so fast now, but only took me a day to finally write it all down.

How many stories have you written?

I can’t count! I have been writing stories all my life.

What motivated you to write this screenplay?

Again, had the idea for a while, I will be expanding on it for a feature screenplay.

What obstacles did you face to finish this screenplay?

It’s so short, so the obstacles were about what I should leave out.

Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?

Filmmaking, art, music and my loved ones.

Any advice or tips you’d like to pass on to other writers?

Get your story out there. Don’t be afraid to share.

Director/Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com

Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne

Editor: John Johnson

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Winning Short Screenplay – Bureaucracy by Sharmini Kumar

BUREAUCRACY
Written by Sharmini Kumar

CAST LIST:

CLERK – Dan Cristofori
NARRATOR – Peter Nelson
YOUNG WOMAN – Kelly Daly

SYNOPSIS:

Comedy, Horror, Fantasy

A screenplay about bureaucracy and unnecessary red tape. And also vampires.

Get to know the winning writer:

What is your screenplay about?

It’s about bureaucracy and unnecessary red tape. And also vampires.

What genres does your screenplay under?

Comedy, horror.

Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?

I think it would be a lot of fun for cast, crew and audience. There’s a lot of potential for both suspense and comedy and playing with the timing to get both of those things.

How would you describe this script in two words?

Terrifyingly relatable.

What movie have you seen the most times in your life?

Bend it Like Beckham. It was the first time I had seen an English-language film with a person of colour as the protagonist.

How long have you been working on this screenplay?

I had had the idea for awhile, but it was only a couple of days once I put pen to paper (fingers to keyboard).

How many stories have you written?

I don’t know – a lot. I’ve been writing since I was about eight. But I think my stories have improved a little since the one about the princess who owned sapphires, rubies and emeralds. (She divorced her husband and ran the country.)

What motivated you to write this screenplay?

We can all relate to dealing with unnecessary bureaucracy. I wanted the situation to be as heightened as possible and to explore the boundary between comedy and horror/suspense.

What obstacles did you face to finish this screenplay?

One page is a very short screenplay! I often tend to write a lot of dialogue but that wouldn’t work here. I needed to be as efficient as possible with the storytelling.

Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?

I’m passionate about film, theatre and books and the intersections between them. I’m passionate about wanting to see a more just world. And I’m passionate about the difference between ‘less’ and ‘fewer’.

Any advice or tips you’d like to pass on to other writers?

The only way I know how to write is to put my backside in a seat and write. Then stand up and pace while I’m thinking. Then return to the seat and keep writing. Good luck.

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Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne

Editor: John Johnson

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Winning Short Screenplay – Care And Cleaning by Robin Kenny

CARE AND CLEANING
Written by Robin Kenny

CAST LIST:

NARRATOR – Laura Kyswaty
YOUNGER VOICE – Peter Nelson
OLDER VOICE – Kelly Daly

SYNOPSIS:

Sci-Fi

The off-screen voices are non-human aliens; we hear it as English. The story explores the strange human notion that any living thing can be a pet; after all, people do it with cats, dogs, rats, snakes, reptiles…

Get to know the winning writer:

What is your screenplay about?

The off-screen voices are non-human aliens; we hear it as English. The story explores the strange human notion that any living thing can be a pet; after all, people do it with cats, dogs, rats, snakes, reptiles…

What genres does your screenplay under?

Science fiction allegory.

Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?

It would only work as a movie if there were the hope of escape or if the ‘aliens’ could be rationally convinced to let the human go.

How would you describe this script in two words?

Creepy zoo.

What movie have you seen the most times in your life?

Stanley Kubrick’s 2001: a space odyssey. I’m addicted.

How long have you been working on this screenplay?

Half a day. It was fun.

How many stories have you written?

Any stories? More than forty. Good stories? Less than five.

What motivated you to write this screenplay?

Forgotten why – but I was influenced by the visuals in THX-1138.

What obstacles did you face to finish this screenplay?

This story ‘wrote itself’.

Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?

Computers, film making, and family. (really)

Any advice or tips you’d like to pass on to other writers?

Always know more about the story’s universe than you tell. If you struggle to find story beats, then set the project aside and try something else. Take care of your health (get outta that chair!) If you need profanity to tell the story, that means you don’t know enough about your characters, their backgrounds or the plot itself. (You are trying to punch it up by using shock tactics. Don’t do that. It isn’t worthy of you nor honest to your audience.)

Director/Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com

Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne

Editor: John Johnson

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