Thanks for the feedback! Very helpful. I’ve heard much the same lately, about scenes dragging out/story beats repeating (probably a side effect of trying to write/direct/edit my first film with little outside perspective). I definitely appreciate that there’s more good than bad! I really appreciate that, at least thematically, the theme came across.
– B. Jonas
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